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OP 23 April, 2019 - 10:13 PM
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@Ordwise, The Wise, The Wonderful, The Wifebeater
A story by TheShred
He wanted to have a story where he was the hero
So I did the opposite
In a world quite like this one @Ordwise sat slumped down
in his armchair watching a ball game with a beer in his hand.
in came his son poor little shred he always got bullied at school
by the big kids like @MeSvAk, Not only that but when Shred got home
There his dad stared as he walked in the room, @Ordwise stood up
and asked why he had bruises all over his face, Shred started crying
@Ordwise called him a bitch, little shred cried tears flowing like rivers
then @Ordwise raised his boot and slammed it against poor shreds face
as blood came out his nose shred fell weak, not able to see straight
his mother @TFue came running in sobbing and screaming yelling
"please please don't hurt him" @Ordwise just gave a deep stare
and grabbed @TFue's hair he dragged and he dragged @TFue along
as @TFue screamed clawed and struggled @Ordwise didn't change he still had the steer, he went into his room locked the door behind, all little shred heard
was his mum @TFue cry "please not the bat" then a thump then silence
no noise was made, shred sat for hours waiting and waiting for his mum to come out
5 hours later his dad had gotten a beer and Shred saw his mother on the floor, blood
dripping out of her hair, hands outstretched wide, naked and cold.
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23 April, 2019 - 10:20 PM
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(23 April, 2019 - 10:13 PM)TheShred Wrote: Show More@Ordwise, The Wise, The Wonderful, The Wifebeater
A story by TheShred
He wanted to have a story where he was the hero
So I did the opposite
In a world quite like this one @Ordwise sat slumped down
in his armchair watching a ball game with a beer in his hand.
in came his son poor little shred he always got bullied at school
by the big kids like @MeSvAk, Not only that but when Shred got home
There his dad stared as he walked in the room, @Ordwise stood up
and asked why he had bruises all over his face, Shred started crying
@Ordwise called him a bitch, little shred cried tears flowing like rivers
then @Ordwise raised his boot and slammed it against poor shreds face
as blood came out his nose shred fell weak, not able to see straight
his mother @TFue came running in sobbing and screaming yelling
"please please don't hurt him" @Ordwise just gave a deep stare
and grabbed @TFue's hair he dragged and he dragged @TFue along
as @TFue screamed clawed and struggled @Ordwise didn't change he still had the steer, he went into his room locked the door behind, all little shred heard
was his mum @TFue cry "please not the bat" then a thump then silence
no noise was made, shred sat for hours waiting and waiting for his mum to come out
5 hours later his dad had gotten a beer and Shred saw his mother on the floor, blood
dripping out of her hair, hands outstretched wide, naked and cold.
I LIKE YOIUR RHYMES MAN
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OP 24 April, 2019 - 06:30 AM
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24 April, 2019 - 06:57 AM
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(24 April, 2019 - 06:30 AM)TheShred Wrote: Show More
i think you have confused me with @ Overside right?
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24 April, 2019 - 11:54 AM
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(23 April, 2019 - 10:13 PM)TheShred Wrote: Show More@Ordwise, The Wise, The Wonderful, The Wifebeater
A story by TheShred
He wanted to have a story where he was the hero
So I did the opposite
In a world quite like this one @Ordwise sat slumped down
in his armchair watching a ball game with a beer in his hand.
in came his son poor little shred he always got bullied at school
by the big kids like @MeSvAk, Not only that but when Shred got home
There his dad stared as he walked in the room, @Ordwise stood up
and asked why he had bruises all over his face, Shred started crying
@Ordwise called him a bitch, little shred cried tears flowing like rivers
then @Ordwise raised his boot and slammed it against poor shreds face
as blood came out his nose shred fell weak, not able to see straight
his mother @TFue came running in sobbing and screaming yelling
"please please don't hurt him" @Ordwise just gave a deep stare
and grabbed @TFue's hair he dragged and he dragged @TFue along
as @TFue screamed clawed and struggled @Ordwise didn't change he still had the steer, he went into his room locked the door behind, all little shred heard
was his mum @TFue cry "please not the bat" then a thump then silence
no noise was made, shred sat for hours waiting and waiting for his mum to come out
5 hours later his dad had gotten a beer and Shred saw his mother on the floor, blood
dripping out of her hair, hands outstretched wide, naked and cold.
I actually did not enjoy the read at all, but it was creative.
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24 April, 2019 - 12:00 PM
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(24 April, 2019 - 11:54 AM)TFue Wrote: Show More (23 April, 2019 - 10:13 PM)TheShred Wrote: Show More@Ordwise, The Wise, The Wonderful, The Wifebeater
A story by TheShred
He wanted to have a story where he was the hero
So I did the opposite
In a world quite like this one @Ordwise sat slumped down
in his armchair watching a ball game with a beer in his hand.
in came his son poor little shred he always got bullied at school
by the big kids like @MeSvAk, Not only that but when Shred got home
There his dad stared as he walked in the room, @Ordwise stood up
and asked why he had bruises all over his face, Shred started crying
@Ordwise called him a bitch, little shred cried tears flowing like rivers
then @Ordwise raised his boot and slammed it against poor shreds face
as blood came out his nose shred fell weak, not able to see straight
his mother @TFue came running in sobbing and screaming yelling
"please please don't hurt him" @Ordwise just gave a deep stare
and grabbed @TFue's hair he dragged and he dragged @TFue along
as @TFue screamed clawed and struggled @Ordwise didn't change he still had the steer, he went into his room locked the door behind, all little shred heard
was his mum @TFue cry "please not the bat" then a thump then silence
no noise was made, shred sat for hours waiting and waiting for his mum to come out
5 hours later his dad had gotten a beer and Shred saw his mother on the floor, blood
dripping out of her hair, hands outstretched wide, naked and cold.
I actually did not enjoy the read at all, but it was creative. If you are not gay please delete it
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OP 24 April, 2019 - 01:10 PM
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(24 April, 2019 - 11:54 AM)TFue Wrote: Show More (23 April, 2019 - 10:13 PM)TheShred Wrote: Show More@Ordwise, The Wise, The Wonderful, The Wifebeater
A story by TheShred
He wanted to have a story where he was the hero
So I did the opposite
In a world quite like this one @Ordwise sat slumped down
in his armchair watching a ball game with a beer in his hand.
in came his son poor little shred he always got bullied at school
by the big kids like @MeSvAk, Not only that but when Shred got home
There his dad stared as he walked in the room, @Ordwise stood up
and asked why he had bruises all over his face, Shred started crying
@Ordwise called him a bitch, little shred cried tears flowing like rivers
then @Ordwise raised his boot and slammed it against poor shreds face
as blood came out his nose shred fell weak, not able to see straight
his mother @TFue came running in sobbing and screaming yelling
"please please don't hurt him" @Ordwise just gave a deep stare
and grabbed @TFue's hair he dragged and he dragged @TFue along
as @TFue screamed clawed and struggled @Ordwise didn't change he still had the steer, he went into his room locked the door behind, all little shred heard
was his mum @TFue cry "please not the bat" then a thump then silence
no noise was made, shred sat for hours waiting and waiting for his mum to come out
5 hours later his dad had gotten a beer and Shred saw his mother on the floor, blood
dripping out of her hair, hands outstretched wide, naked and cold.
I actually did not enjoy the read at all, but it was creative.
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