Does this thread desgin look good? please give suggestions

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The colors you are using would fit a black/dark background better than it would with a white background.
Overall shapes seem okay.

 

[367]

The colors you are using would fit a black/dark background better than it would with a white background.
Overall shapes seem okay.

Ill try that

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Real good bro
Way too long tho

[208]

It's okay but it is very basic, it wouldn't be a selling point for me personally.

[532]

It's so small can't even see.

That's what she said. 


Honestly I'm not a fan of the Font (to childish), or the colors (Red on Red on Red?  Really? You're on the right track though! Keep it up!

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It looks too simple to me has have no depth. It's just very repetitive and too much colors are used. It can also be compresses a lot more and font size is really big. Sizing and the use of white space can also use some work.